05-23-2013, 01:16 PM
(05-23-2013, 06:11 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:Don't understand this poem. My mind hasn't been working so good today so maybe thats why. I would ask what your intent with this piece is?across my doorstep
blackbird's haphazard attempt
at building a nest, -- I would be more specific with this imageryI've offered my assistance
rejection is her refrain -- I would represent the bird's rejection in a sort of action
on reaching my tree
I informed people nearby
"I am happy monkey!"
soon after we were alone
just me, tree and Simian -- well I like the repetition of sound here