The Reasoning
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(05-23-2013, 02:59 AM)Wildcard Wrote:  because you are just opinionated enough
to make me feel as if I have won something
when you knuckle under to my oppression

in spite of your body
which looks better
in dim light

on top
of liking you a lot
for being dumb enough to fuck with me

instead of just leaving you
so you can find someone who will lie to you
like any real lover would
If only it rhymed...this is perfect as a concept. C'mon mark. Give in to effort. This is GOOD.
Best,
tectak
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The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 05-23-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: The Real Reason - by tectak - 05-23-2013, 03:03 AM
RE: The Real Reason - by HelenaHandbasket - 05-24-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: The Real Reason - by modern_poet - 05-24-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: The Real Reason - by billy - 05-24-2013, 12:08 PM
RE: The Real Reason - by Wildcard - 05-25-2013, 09:05 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by tectak - 07-28-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: The Real Reason - by serge gurkski - 05-25-2013, 10:49 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 07-28-2013, 12:58 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 07-28-2013, 07:10 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by billy - 07-28-2013, 11:01 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 07-28-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by billy - 07-28-2013, 11:31 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 07-28-2013, 11:32 AM
RE: The Reasoning - by heslopian - 07-28-2013, 12:09 PM
RE: The Reasoning - by Wildcard - 07-28-2013, 11:27 PM
RE: The Reasoning - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 12:38 AM



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