05-18-2013, 08:59 PM
This was really interesting to me! I like the imagery, especially like the first two lines. And the part about the beast come to drink, I liked that too. I'm not too sure about the message, though I do believe you have something to say.
I googled the title - it's a french metaphor? Seems to be difficult to translate, but it seems "the witching hour" was a proposed translation. Literally it refers to the time of day when, in the fading light, a dog cannot be distinguished from a wolf.
Was the part about the beast an allusion to that? Did you mean to draw a parallel between what the beast appeared to be and what it really was?
Haha I'm sorry I'm totally guessing over here, but I really found it very interesting and I enjoyed the read. Thanks so much for sharing!
I googled the title - it's a french metaphor? Seems to be difficult to translate, but it seems "the witching hour" was a proposed translation. Literally it refers to the time of day when, in the fading light, a dog cannot be distinguished from a wolf.
Was the part about the beast an allusion to that? Did you mean to draw a parallel between what the beast appeared to be and what it really was?
Haha I'm sorry I'm totally guessing over here, but I really found it very interesting and I enjoyed the read. Thanks so much for sharing!