The Vigil

[GDavid]

@Volaticus... Thanks for reading. I read your last two poems and found no more than 4 words to a line. My assumption from your critique and in reading your work is that your style is the short lines.
I went for the visual shape of the poem. Sorry it was distracting to you, however I can certainly understand your expressed thoughts.
Once again thank you for taking the time to read my work.