Festival of Diversity*

[Volaticus]

Hi Volaticus,
If the more stanzas you were thinking of adding are like these, then yes definitely because this one ended far too soon. This is very poetic and with a surreal quality that isn't over the top surreal. The images you create are very beautiful, I look forward to reading more of it.
Thanks AR

Hi AR,
It makes me very happy to hear that you like it, and that you think it's something I should continue working on. Poetic and surreal was my goal of the atmosphere, so it's good to hear that it shines through.
I hope I'll get a few more comments/crits, and then I'll definitely work from that, and try to make this into a finished, (hopefully) solid poem. Thanks again very much.
Best,
-LB