(slight edit)Three Haiku

[Magpie]

I think that your slight edit, is a definite improvement The images are sharp and clear.
I had to read the first one a few times, because the 'petrol lawnmower' threw me a bit. But after a few reads, I think it is a very refreshing haiku, I like the surprise in the last line.
Also, I like the ambiguity (is that the right word? I aimed for that is has different interpretations) of the second one.
I think they are all excellent.
Thanks for the read
-LB

Hi Volaticus,
Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you liked them. I'm still hoping that at some point I'll post some haiku and they won't need any edits. These are the first new haiku I've wrote and posted on here, all the others were from last year, but I'm back into writing them again. Thanks also for commenting on the rainbow picture thing, I tried to delete it yesterday because I wasn't very happy with it, but it wouldn't let me delete.
Thanks again for the comments
AR