05-14-2013, 06:10 AM
Interesting sonnet. Some of the rhymes don't rhyme but I don't know if they have to rhyme perfectly these days. Some of the sentences are mixed up a little bit though like
Searching for that hand, eyes meet, and she hails
Up, she is pulled, manners she's seen never
thanks.
-H
Searching for that hand, eyes meet, and she hails
Up, she is pulled, manners she's seen never
thanks.
-H

