The Little Things

[Magpie]

[ind]adoring eyes,
[ind]a doting gesture,
[ind]a gentle squeeze;
i am.


(This poem is translated. I'd like to hear your honest opinions. Thanks.)

I think in a lot of respects translating a poem is harder than writing one, but because I only speak one language I can't really comment, and I take my hat off to anyone writing in a language that isn't there mother tongue. I have had certain foreign poems that I really liked and then came across a different translation and it was like a different poem, and vice versa.
Google translate perhaps, it usually very accurate.
AR