(slight edit)Three Haiku
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(05-13-2013, 11:35 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  
Springtide aromas,
Peach Blossom, freshly cut grass,
petrol lawnmower.

Unexpected breeze
whips up a dusty frenzy
amid the Tulips.

Three small Chaffinches
perched on the fence, listen to
my guitar playing.
Haven't read to many Haikus but these seem pretty cool. Why write haikus? What is the aesthetic paradigm there?
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(slight edit)Three Haiku - by Magpie - 05-13-2013, 11:35 AM
RE: Three Haiku - by Brownlie - 05-13-2013, 11:59 AM
RE: Three Haiku - by Magpie - 05-13-2013, 12:13 PM
RE: Three Haiku - by billy - 05-13-2013, 12:34 PM
RE: Three Haiku - by Magpie - 05-13-2013, 12:46 PM
RE: (slight edit)Three Haiku - by Magpie - 05-13-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: (slight edit)Three Haiku - by Volaticus - 05-14-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: (slight edit)Three Haiku - by Magpie - 05-14-2013, 07:37 AM



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