Whippoorwills

[Keith]

You have solid poem here that could use a tidy and would stand up in one of the workshops forums. not sure why its in fun ?

The harbinger of death is very symbolic given the arrival of boots outside gramps window and the poem is atmospheric enough for the reader to sense the tension. Thanks S

The truth is, I just thought it was a fun poem. I am fine with the way it is (not that it is perfect by any means) but it is quirky and I wasn't really interested in work shopping it.

Thanks for the comments.

milo

Fairy Nuff agrees