Morning Muse
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(05-12-2013, 07:19 AM)justcloudy Wrote:  Hi j. With the backstory this is lovely. Now put that story into the poem and you've got it. Looking fwd to an edit.
Your feedback was the push I needed, justcloudy, thanks.
Here's the edit:

Four o'clock this morning
coffee's aroma leads
again to hunger;

she's sitting, writing poetry
forever sipping herbal tea-
hoping to meet at last,
the man who's inspired
her early morning writing;

he asks to meet
for coffee soon;
four in the morning
coffee brews,
paper is aroma.
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Morning Muse - by jkaram - 05-11-2013, 07:48 PM
RE: Morning Muse - by lmh - 05-11-2013, 11:17 PM
RE: Morning Muse - by Brownlie - 05-11-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: Morning Muse - by albino-rino-5000 - 05-12-2013, 12:51 AM
RE: Morning Muse - by jkaram - 05-12-2013, 03:03 AM
RE: Morning Muse - by justcloudy - 05-12-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: Morning Muse - by jkaram - 05-12-2013, 02:46 PM
RE: Morning Muse - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 06:01 AM



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