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my first poem on this forum

NakedBear Offline

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05-07-2013, 01:51 PM

Hi,

I think I see where you want to go with this, but find it lacks specific examples/images to connect with.

Why are you pathetic, or why can you be seen? Why to every proposition.

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my first poem on this forum - by niklasheide - 05-07-2013, 03:34 AM

RE: my first poem on this forum - by NakedBear - 05-07-2013, 01:51 PM

RE: my first poem on this forum - by Brownlie - 05-07-2013, 02:26 PM

RE: my first poem on this forum - by WordsWorth - 05-07-2013, 08:36 PM

RE: my first poem on this forum - by Sam33lynn - 05-08-2013, 10:29 AM

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