Love Poem
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful feedback, Cody PhoenixSmile

Thank you for your kind and honest feedback, BilboSmile You've articulated something that I hadn't, quite, though it's concerned me: I never described the woman. And she is a woman, not a church or a symbol for anything like that. She's Pugin's (the 19th-century architect) dream because she represents a resurgance of Christian beauty, like a human reflection of the Gothic revival, not because loads of clergymen have been inside herHysterical I like your note about the X-menBig Grin Pugin meets Sue Storm... "You", by the way, is God, who the poem is addressed to. Thanks again for your feedback!
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Love Poem - by heslopian - 05-05-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Love Poem - by cidermaid - 05-05-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 05-06-2013, 04:45 AM
RE: Love Poem - by Magpie - 05-06-2013, 12:08 AM
RE: Love Poem - by Cody Phoenix - 05-06-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: Love Poem - by billy - 05-06-2013, 03:45 PM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 05-06-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Love Poem - by billy - 05-06-2013, 10:53 PM
RE: Love Poem - by knicodemus3 - 05-06-2013, 11:49 PM
RE: Love Poem - by heslopian - 05-07-2013, 01:46 AM



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