05-06-2013, 12:08 AM
Hi Heslopian,
I read your poem yesterday and was fascinated by the imagery as well as the feelings that it stirred within. I confess I have not come anywhere as close as Cidermaid in deciphering the meaning and I am extremely impressed with the information that she managed to come up with.
But even without fully understanding the meaning, it still managed to move me with it's almost biblical apocalyptic imagery and then the surprising last line.
One day I may get good enough to offer some more serious critique but for the moment I'll just say thanks for the read, and I look forward to reading the explanation.
Cheers AR
I read your poem yesterday and was fascinated by the imagery as well as the feelings that it stirred within. I confess I have not come anywhere as close as Cidermaid in deciphering the meaning and I am extremely impressed with the information that she managed to come up with.
But even without fully understanding the meaning, it still managed to move me with it's almost biblical apocalyptic imagery and then the surprising last line.
One day I may get good enough to offer some more serious critique but for the moment I'll just say thanks for the read, and I look forward to reading the explanation.
Cheers AR
wae aye man ye radgie