Escaping the Shadow of Hate

Escaping the Shadow of Hate

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05-03-2013, 04:48 PM

(05-03-2013, 02:15 PM)billy Wrote: i'll leave some feedback later jack

Cheers, Bilbo Smile

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful feedback, cidermaid Smile

You say that you don't have a suggestion for an alternate word for "tear" in L1 of S2, but how about "gulf", which you mention in your note? I like the word vacuous too. I don't get to use it often enough.

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Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 01:11 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by billy - 05-03-2013, 02:15 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by cidermaid - 05-03-2013, 04:18 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-03-2013, 04:48 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by Brownlie - 05-04-2013, 02:50 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by cidermaid - 05-04-2013, 04:59 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by billy - 05-04-2013, 05:20 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-04-2013, 06:56 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by milo - 05-04-2013, 07:32 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-04-2013, 07:43 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by milo - 05-04-2013, 07:54 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by Todd - 05-04-2013, 10:55 PM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-05-2013, 04:22 AM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-05-2013, 04:29 AM

RE: Escaping the Shadow of Hate - by heslopian - 05-05-2013, 04:36 AM

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