Two senryu
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(05-03-2013, 07:51 AM)billy Wrote:  i really like this. two good images. they both have a touch of the comedic about them
Thanks again Billy for your comments, these two were originally written as Haiku but then after getting more of an understanding of Haiku through my post yesterday I realised that these two are better as Senryu, especially for the fact that they have humour in them.
Also I never meant it to be so, but yes there is a feathered element to the past five poems I've posted, I'll sort it out. Just as I read your 'bird' comment my first thought was "I hope he doesn't read "pugnacious" about the robin trying to evict me. And then within seconds I noticed your comment. Busted. I deserve to be assimilated. Big Grin
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Messages In This Thread
Two senryu - by Magpie - 05-03-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: Two senryu - by billy - 05-03-2013, 07:51 AM
RE: Two senryu - by Magpie - 05-03-2013, 10:20 AM
RE: Two senryu - by billy - 05-03-2013, 02:17 PM
RE: Two senryu - by serge gurkski - 05-03-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: Two senryu - by Magpie - 05-04-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: Two senryu - by serge gurkski - 05-04-2013, 08:50 AM
RE: Two senryu - by Volaticus - 05-04-2013, 08:19 AM



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