Down the side of the Sofa

[Keith]

Enjoyed this muchly, interesting to hear you say it scans ok for meter when you read it out loud, I have the same problem sometimes where it sounds ok when I read it but not for others, I gave up long ago pandering to them , if it's me that is going to perform the piece sod em. depends on whether you want praise or not I suppose
Smif

Thanks Smiffy, praise is a drug best taken with critique. TOMH