Pride
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(04-28-2013, 09:50 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(04-14-2013, 04:27 AM)Pigalo Wrote:  PRIDE

From memory's dawn I have known
Feelings to be ploys; I was shone
The guile of joy; but I could not quell
These passions far too strong to tell.

In childhood I endured alone;
My counsel came from my own throne;
While others danced, I watched and sighed;
And all I loved I loved inside. AND FOR THE RECORD, THIS IS ALMOST PLAGIARISING OF E.A. POE FROM "ALONE",but not quite

When veterans returned with pride
I marked with shame how I denied
The wars I fought, the scars I hide--
For all I fought I fought inside.
It should be pointed out that referring or even directly copying a line from a famous poem is never considered plagiarism, but allusion. (Think "The Wastelands". For further research I suggest writing a Glosa or two.

milo
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Messages In This Thread
Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Bloggsworth - 04-14-2013, 05:55 AM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Pride - by heslopian - 04-14-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Pride - by billy - 04-14-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 01:41 PM
RE: Pride - by billy - 04-14-2013, 02:58 PM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-14-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-15-2013, 02:51 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-28-2013, 09:50 PM
RE: Pride - by milo - 04-29-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-29-2013, 05:27 PM
RE: Pride - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 10:01 AM
RE: Pride - by milo - 04-29-2013, 06:05 PM



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