Sun in my Spirit

[rowens]

The words sound nice together, though the story is pretty simplistic; and it feels there could be more to it.


The sun resonates in my spirit and I
Smile. Warmth and repose engulf me
And I am certain nature is mine.

Tranquility transcends as the sun melts
For the day and the worn sea yawns.

Oh salty wet heavens how sweetly you
Fill my dry lungs? As I watch your

You don't need a question mark in that kind of statement.
sweet seascape I am eternally yours.