Help with a poem I wrote
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Hello there everybody.I tried to write a poem in english (I'm bulgarian) for somebody,and I wanted to make sure I didn't make any mistakes in it.If you find someting that doesen't look quite right (like grammar errors etc.) let me know.Here it is:


I had this dream,this vivid dream,
of a lady in purple and white.
She smiled to me,or so it seemed,
nearly blinding my sight.

Then she quietly left with the sunrise,
and all the colors slowly faded to gray.
Skies adopted the shine of her innocent blue eyes,
now it’s lost, like tears in rain.

She will be far, so very far,
like flower on a distant moon,
And I’ll be calling her name through this broken guitar,
till every note goes out of tune

The days will pass as I grow older,
many strangers will pass nearby,
but I’ll still sing the words I’ve never told her,
and hear the sound of her early goodbye.
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Help with a poem I wrote - by Lyubster - 04-23-2013, 06:11 PM
RE: Help with a poem I wrote - by Todd - 04-23-2013, 08:59 PM
RE: Help with a poem I wrote - by Lyubster - 04-23-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Help with a poem I wrote - by milo - 04-24-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Help with a poem I wrote - by Lyubster - 04-24-2013, 05:41 PM



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