04-23-2013, 01:36 PM
I love this piece! You painted a picture (pun intended) by revealing information rather than stating it--and yet the information is still conveyed clearly. Wonderful.
I agree with billy that "now" isn't needed. But your last stanza is my favorite. Really hauntingly beautiful. It depicts the desperation of a painter, putting their blood and sweat into their work. I also really really loved your first stanza. It is simple yet unique. Thanks for the read
I agree with billy that "now" isn't needed. But your last stanza is my favorite. Really hauntingly beautiful. It depicts the desperation of a painter, putting their blood and sweat into their work. I also really really loved your first stanza. It is simple yet unique. Thanks for the read