04-23-2013, 09:29 AM
This piece was a fun read. I found it rhythmic and musical and liked the repetition. I really liked the style and seeing the changes as the child grows to old age. However, I was a little confused as to why what 'he thinks' and 'he knows' contradicts (except for the last stanza). I feel as if there is something very profound and meaningful in this poem, but I cannot quite reach what it is because of this confusion. What I do know, is that the idea of a child going from innocence and happiness to old age and pain elicits much sadness. I felt you painted the picture of this character very well. Good job!