04-23-2013, 04:28 AM
Links have been removed -- in future you may post links to your own blog in your signature, but not in the text of a poem for critique.
Additionally, the rules of this and all other critique forums clearly state that you must give meaningful, considered feedback on other poems before posting your own here. Please familiarise yourself with the forum rules/ admin
Additionally, the rules of this and all other critique forums clearly state that you must give meaningful, considered feedback on other poems before posting your own here. Please familiarise yourself with the forum rules/ admin
It could be worse