The lighthouse Keeper...Final edit.Thanks to all who workshopped this.

[tectak]

i think this is your finest hour.
because the poem is extensive, it will have niggles to some no matter what next you edit.
i think this is worthy of locking away or submitting to somewhere that accepts poetry submissions.
no more crit from me, it's a wrap

Shit billy, so its all downhill from here
Thanks. I'm leaving now.
Best,
tectak