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neon window
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04-19-2013, 09:02 AM
Hi tectak, I do intend to make some edits to this. Apparently, I need to work on the line breaks. My phrase "Punks vying for my attention" seems grammatically acceptable , "pinks" not so good. Thanks once more for your suggestions and opinion, if you have any pointers regarding the line breaks I could use them.
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neon window - by Heartafire - 04-16-2013, 05:56 AM
RE: neon window - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-16-2013, 06:59 AM
RE: neon window - by Heartafire - 04-16-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: neon window - by tectak - 04-18-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: neon window - by tectak - 04-19-2013, 04:22 PM
RE: neon window - by Heartafire - 04-19-2013, 10:40 PM
RE: neon window - by tectak - 04-16-2013, 08:02 AM
RE: neon window - by Leanne - 04-17-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: neon window - by Heartafire - 04-19-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: neon window - by curt551 - 04-19-2013, 09:47 AM
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