04-15-2013, 05:27 AM
(04-15-2013, 02:51 AM)Pigalo Wrote: What you are trying to say is " For as long as I can remember" in a less cliched and more poetic way. EXACTLY. COMPLAINT?It didn't work. It created a cliche were one did not need to be.....well, I try at all times not to be too easy and too unhelpful but you have me confused with someone else. ...so don't shout at me.
Dreadful line. CURIOUS WHY. COMPLAINT? forced rhyme...you wanna fight about it? It's hit-the-crit time
Colonic evacuation. Lucky you were on your throne. SADLY, A GOOD POINT! NEVER THOUGHT OF IT THAT WAY.
For all I fought I fought inside. I could not fail to disagree with you less here. IF YOUR COMPLAINT EXTENDS TO MORE THAN THE REFRAIN, EXPLAIN? Christ, this is like the bloody inquisition. I cannot explain it...that is the problem.
The best way I can describe your thinking is burgeoning. I COULD NOT FAIL TO DISAGREE WITH YOU LESS.PLANNING AND STRUCTURE LONG LABORED OVER. JUST PREFER BREVITY. BUT ALSO I THINK MY PURPOSE MAY BE TOO UNCLEAR TO WARRANT YOUR RESPONSE. It's crit-the-crit time...sheesh! I was only trying to help.
...but I do agree about your purpose...I think....or not.
YOUR FEEDBACK WAS MOST DIFFICULT AND MOST HELPFUL. THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME.
Best,
tectak[/b]


