Pride
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(04-15-2013, 02:51 AM)Pigalo Wrote:  What you are trying to say is " For as long as I can remember" in a less cliched and more poetic way. EXACTLY. COMPLAINT?It didn't work. It created a cliche were one did not need to be.

Dreadful line. CURIOUS WHY. COMPLAINT? forced rhyme...you wanna fight about it? It's hit-the-crit timeSmile

Colonic evacuation. Lucky you were on your throne. SADLY, A GOOD POINT! NEVER THOUGHT OF IT THAT WAY. Smile

For all I fought I fought inside. I could not fail to disagree with you less here. IF YOUR COMPLAINT EXTENDS TO MORE THAN THE REFRAIN, EXPLAIN? Christ, this is like the bloody inquisition. I cannot explain it...that is the problem.

The best way I can describe your thinking is burgeoning. I COULD NOT FAIL TO DISAGREE WITH YOU LESS. Smile PLANNING AND STRUCTURE LONG LABORED OVER. JUST PREFER BREVITY. BUT ALSO I THINK MY PURPOSE MAY BE TOO UNCLEAR TO WARRANT YOUR RESPONSE. It's crit-the-crit time...sheesh! I was only trying to help.Smile ...but I do agree about your purpose...I think....or not.

YOUR FEEDBACK WAS MOST DIFFICULT AND MOST HELPFUL. THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME.
....well, I try at all times not to be too easy and too unhelpful but you have me confused with someone else. ...so don't shout at me.
Best,
tectak[/b]
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Messages In This Thread
Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 04:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Bloggsworth - 04-14-2013, 05:55 AM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Pride - by heslopian - 04-14-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Pride - by billy - 04-14-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-14-2013, 01:41 PM
RE: Pride - by billy - 04-14-2013, 02:58 PM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-14-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: Pride - by Pigalo - 04-15-2013, 02:51 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: Pride - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-28-2013, 09:50 PM
RE: Pride - by milo - 04-29-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: Pride - by tectak - 04-29-2013, 05:27 PM
RE: Pride - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 10:01 AM
RE: Pride - by milo - 04-29-2013, 06:05 PM



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