04-11-2013, 04:57 AM
Hi,
It looks like you need some corrections with the grammar. Some of the sentences were hard to read, or sounded strange.
"I often am by sadness overtaken." "The sky once blue is with blood now red" etc.
Oh, too late. I see that Leanne has already pointed that out
It looks like you need some corrections with the grammar. Some of the sentences were hard to read, or sounded strange.
"I often am by sadness overtaken." "The sky once blue is with blood now red" etc.
Oh, too late. I see that Leanne has already pointed that out