I Lay
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I stumbled upon Lay Lady Lay and Eric Clapton's Lay Down Sally upon researching this as well.
Does this give me enough justification/leeway to leave my poem to "I Lay"?

Thank you for enlightening me about my misconception of "I" from "me".

There is another point I want to be clarified on though, Stanza 2 Line 3
Quote:All efforts to do so was futile
I am rather confused in the subject verb agreement of this, so I ended up using "was", should it be "were"?
I say "All it took was four screws" but likewise, it can also be said, "All it took were four screws". Alternatively, we can also say, "four screws was all it took".
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I Lay - by Zero - 04-09-2013, 04:38 PM
RE: I Lay - by cidermaid - 04-10-2013, 01:43 AM
RE: I Lay - by Heartafire - 04-10-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: I Lay - by Crepuscule - 04-10-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 08:04 AM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 02:02 PM
RE: I Lay - by Crepuscule - 04-10-2013, 03:52 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 04:04 PM
RE: I Lay - by Crepuscule - 04-10-2013, 04:21 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 03:31 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 04:00 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 04:12 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 04:20 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 04:33 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 04:43 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 04:52 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 05:37 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 05:58 PM
RE: I Lay - by milo - 04-10-2013, 06:42 PM
RE: I Lay - by Zero - 04-10-2013, 08:06 PM



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