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Thanks everyone. Agreed, most likely I need to break this up. No time at the moment though, week's beginning. Heart, will consider using tract houses, good idea. They are different shades, though sometimes you go into a development, and you get rows and rows of the same thing, street after street! Trueenigma, no worries, I wasn't talking about the plus sign comment, just that after posting I checked back, and from your comment about phrasing I went through the poem again, and made several wording changes.
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Suburbia Advertisement - by PoetryAndPhysics - 04-07-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by trueenigma - 04-07-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by PoetryAndPhysics - 04-07-2013, 01:24 PM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by justcloudy - 04-07-2013, 09:06 PM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by trueenigma - 04-08-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by Heartafire - 04-08-2013, 01:13 AM
RE: Suburbia Advertisement - by PoetryAndPhysics - 04-08-2013, 11:14 PM



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