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Hi Gary, I like this very much. It seems our landscape is carved up by class. Subdivisions and tract houses seem to be the American middle class lines. You've done a fine revision. I think I might consider
"endless rows of (tract) houses" rather than roads. Just a thought, as the house are often in rows of various shades of pink. Thank you for this fine text.
My best,
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