04-07-2013, 11:35 PM
I hear you, and understand. Sorry for the let down!
I'd like to ask though, which specific parts of the poem you'd say have problems with the syntax, and in which cases the line breaking has negative effects - I'd like to look at fixing it!
Thanks x
I'd like to ask though, which specific parts of the poem you'd say have problems with the syntax, and in which cases the line breaking has negative effects - I'd like to look at fixing it!
Thanks x