04-07-2013, 11:36 AM
I almost lost lost at the + sign, but being an American i see what you're doing here. I can picture a commercial for the suburbs.
That being said, the phrasing needs work, it's a kinda formless blob as it stands, and how bout a reference to soccer moms? Maybe throw in some some catch phrases to fit your theme.
That being said, the phrasing needs work, it's a kinda formless blob as it stands, and how bout a reference to soccer moms? Maybe throw in some some catch phrases to fit your theme.