04-06-2013, 05:46 AM
got it, yea I had missed it. now I see what you mean, but you don't want to have to explain your poems to readers, they should stand alone and still have meaning. but I dunno, I'm only one reader.
generally clearer is better... here you want to not mention rape, which is fine, but maybe you should limit the ambiguity to that?
generally clearer is better... here you want to not mention rape, which is fine, but maybe you should limit the ambiguity to that?
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.