04-05-2013, 03:09 AM
I really love the tone of this poem. It's soothing and joyful. Quick suggestion - the third line doesn't quite scan, and possibly "summer scenes" would help with that, instead of "summer scenery"?
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RE: Transformation - by 2onthemap - 04-05-2013, 09:55 AM
RE: Transformation - by DoReMi - 04-05-2013, 03:09 AM
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RE: Transformation - by justcloudy - 04-09-2013, 05:49 AM
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