Swing apocalypso

[serge gurkski]

i must recite it . prob, my pc's soundcard as halfway died.

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Hey! everyone:


should i rather go for


swingING apocalypso?

Those lines where you put letters in brackets, they're interesting, although they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem. This speaking problem doesn't rob them of an intellectual pleasure in deciphering them, though.

No to the ING, I think. What would it add? But since this style is so far outside my own area, my opinion may not mean much.

Oh well. Definitely an interesting read.

Mikey.

nono, no "ing"
i was wrong.

Simply forgot to
never change a running horsie.


Thank you Mikey for your interesting remarks.


and may you prosper in all what you do, too

cheers

I

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they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem.

which is the readson I am gonna
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tante grazie