SWING APOCALYPSO

lessons in Cockney:
It is all about the glo'al stop


swing apo-calypso so as sin copa tit sss st o(m) p me now:

swing sing swing

swing apocalypso, a syncopated stomp, stop me now

Apo- so -ever-

calips-

so

sis

this

it

is:

This is where I'm coming from

(this) is where I'm heading at

Swing ellypsis

to sing it as sexy as I cum

sorry: can I – please say yes!

shake your hips, cutie,

shake your booty,

you'r for sure 's sexy as you cum

cum's to none's sur prizzzzzzzze

less oh so yessssssss

Swing apó-calyp-sis-

sie I dig do you to

do you

do me good too

and just as (s)wel l over

ever so yum

me is, sis:

swing sing this

sis

ap

ohhh

ca

lips-

,-)

Makes me wanna dance for some reason. And the wordplay is good. An Apocalyptic calypso. Swing! Ch-ch-ch-ch-cha nice rhythm

i must recite it . prob, my pc's soundcard as halfway died.

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Hey! everyone:


should i rather go for


swingING apocalypso?

(04-04-2013, 03:10 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  i must recite it . prob, my pc's soundcard as halfway died.

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Hey! everyone:


should i rather go for


swingING apocalypso?

Those lines where you put letters in brackets, they're interesting, although they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem. This speaking problem doesn't rob them of an intellectual pleasure in deciphering them, though.

No to the ING, I think. What would it add? But since this style is so far outside my own area, my opinion may not mean much.

Oh well. Definitely an interesting read.

Mikey.

(04-04-2013, 04:19 PM)NakedBear Wrote:  

(04-04-2013, 03:10 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  i must recite it . prob, my pc's soundcard as halfway died.

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Hey! everyone:


should i rather go for


swingING apocalypso?

Those lines where you put letters in brackets, they're interesting, although they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem. This speaking problem doesn't rob them of an intellectual pleasure in deciphering them, though.

No to the ING, I think. What would it add? But since this style is so far outside my own area, my opinion may not mean much.

Oh well. Definitely an interesting read.

Mikey.

nono, no "ing"
i was wrong.

Simply forgot to
never change a running horsie.


Thank you Mikey for your interesting remarks.


and may you prosper in all what you do, too

cheers

I

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they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem.

which is the readson I am gonna
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tante grazie