04-04-2013, 05:46 AM
I'm new here so I can't say much, but this forum is still for critique, just less extensive than mild.
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=5281
That thread tells you where you're best posting - Miscellaneous has no emphasis on critique
Other than that, I think the last two lines sound lovely and would work well in a poem based around them.
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=5281
That thread tells you where you're best posting - Miscellaneous has no emphasis on critique
Other than that, I think the last two lines sound lovely and would work well in a poem based around them.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)