04-02-2013, 11:11 AM
Found this stuck at the back of the forum... gosh this is pretty. My only suggestion would be to remove "the mirage of" as I think the poem is stronger without that qualification.
It could be worse
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Stuck in a Phonebooth
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Stuck in a Phonebooth - by addy - 01-21-2011, 02:05 PM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by billy - 01-28-2011, 01:17 PM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by Leanne - 04-02-2013, 11:11 AM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 11:18 AM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by billy - 04-04-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by Leanne - 04-02-2013, 11:19 AM
RE: Stuck in a Phonebooth - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 08:36 AM
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