03-29-2013, 06:35 PM
It is sometimes interesting when someone invents a new verb, but is this neologism doesn't, to my eyes, seem to relate to either of the two extant meanings of the noun louche or adverb louchely, I am, therefore, disadvantaged from the start; apart from that, for me, the poem is trying too hard to be poetic, which gets in the way of the tale being told.