Sadness is not my name
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Wow, thanks! I really love the input.. I made this revision based on what you said, I hope its in the right direction

My Name (new name of poem)

Sadness is not my name
Yet I was born with
Similar pain ~ under
Her placenta came my
New fame.

Hate is the
Opinion of giants,
Monsters roaming &
Storming my head.

Why
Must the sky
Dawdle when we all
Need to need?

Bent
Over me and handcuffed.

Lime and scum
Rubbing off threats
Screaming / dreaming
No one is left.

Escape
Is the fate of scientists.
For all the rest, it is a mystery.
...(s)he has trouble acting normal when she's nervous

Poetry in motion, played out in the mind of madness
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Messages In This Thread
Sadness is not my name - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-19-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by justcloudy - 03-20-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-20-2013, 12:19 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by Todd - 03-20-2013, 12:40 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-20-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by Leanne - 03-20-2013, 04:29 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-20-2013, 05:08 AM
RE: Sadness is not my name - by tectak - 03-21-2013, 02:53 AM



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