An Introduction To My Confusion

[Todd]

Where punctuation can also really become an issue is also when you have words like ill:

You mean I will, but what comes out is you feel sick.

I think when a lack of something obscures your impact, it deserves some consideration.

I do like your uses of figurative language, such as, comparing addiction and grief to a thief that comes at night to rob you. That seems appropriate for your content.