An Introduction To My Confusion

[softlyfalling]

I can truly feel the sincerity and raw emotion of your poem. Perhaps, in light if that, punctuation and grammar may seem like a blinder to philosophy or a fetter to expression, but I do want to point out that I feel it would only enhance your work. I stumbled more than once, when a simple apostrophe or comma would have smoothed the flow...for instance in S3 L2... "id" is so seriously wrong in this sentence that I felt myself stop short...the lack of punctuation has rendered nonsense when this is a very strong and emotional line!
Maybe my ideas are archaic, so forgive me if this was as you intended.