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[tmanzano]

Stellar poem...insightful and intelligent. Todd gave some excellent feedback, as always...he is a brilliant poet with a lot of knowledge, so I heed his advice, myself.
I am struck so intensely with all that can be inferred from the primary image created in the first stanza. The old man, the angry man (lonely? bitter? sad? grieving? ashamed?) that throws rocks through his OWN window in retaliation to a proffered gesture of good will. I envision a human and social tragedy in this image. I envision the beaten cornered dog that snaps at the hand offering a scrap of food.
So sad, so insightful.

Such thoughtful remarks. Thank you so much. I may have left to many questions on the table here. I need to work on the development for the reader. This piece is about one person. I am trying to address multiple personality disorder. All that you have invisioned is accurate. With this being said, I will work on an edit that brings that more to the surface without giving too much away. That to me is where the rubber meets the road if you will. Thank you for your kind words. I can't wait to get back to work on this.