Moon-Woman Cuts the Circle

[Todd]

The great thing about getting so many comments is it gives you a lot to consider and work on, the bad thing is you feel like you can't adequately thank people for the time they spent. So, thanks (even for the parts of speech discussion). Serge I'll go over your comments in detail when I sit down to edit this true first draft. Tom & Leanne thank you for the additional comments. Saeity thank you for the suggestion and the comments. Milo appreciate your feedback. I assure you the prepositional phrases are at the top of my list.

Thank you all again for taking the time.

Best,

Todd