Where true love lies.. Edit 1. Softlyfalling,Leanne, seth31, heartafire

[tectak]

The lie is caught in air that cries
for breath. The truth has long ago
deserted you and I. The lies
we told, we did not know
(or you would say, not realise)
would see us part and go
our separate ways. How I surprise
myself. I never thought to show
my love, when from your eyes
the heartfelt tears would flow.
I told you not to care; despise
me for my truths, and I'll forego
whatever joy is left to me. Lies
brought us to this point and so
we hold our breath to see who dies
the first. It's always me, and though
you smile, your heart denies
your every word; now we both know
that lies get caught in sighs.
They hang there in the air, and I must go.
tectak
2013

A lovely poem I love from the first line your drawn in
and out and drawn back in like virgin snow.

Thank you,mattie, I think.
Is there any way you think I could improve the piece?
Best,
tectak