03-12-2013, 11:27 PM
Leanne: Thanks for the kind words and comments. I think this is actually an Ekphrastic poem. Though I remembered the thread you started too late. I may post the work that inspired it here. I'm not sure how that works exactly.
Brandon: Thanks for the comments. I'll give the "of lines" some consideration.
Billy: Appreciate the comments. Yep, I'll look at the of's and see where it goes.
Bloggsworth: Nice phrasing, I'll consider the suggestion. I wasn't looking to personify the moon. I had a different her in mind. I'll consider enhancing clarity on the edit.
Thank you all for the helpful comments.
Best,
Todd
Brandon: Thanks for the comments. I'll give the "of lines" some consideration.
Billy: Appreciate the comments. Yep, I'll look at the of's and see where it goes.
Bloggsworth: Nice phrasing, I'll consider the suggestion. I wasn't looking to personify the moon. I had a different her in mind. I'll consider enhancing clarity on the edit.
Thank you all for the helpful comments.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
