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Thanks a lot Claire for your comments !

I think there is some repitition you could pull out like wine, me, and mine.

The repeat of the 2 line with the wine was intentional. It was to link the friend part and that it lead to more and that it was that time that I felt in love... Maybe it was too stumble.
I'll try to find thing to replace 'me' and the final 'With this wife of mine' with something else.

In the beginning when you wrote wrong twice in a stanza it seemed a little redundant.

I though so too... But I didn't know what to put instead... But I though since the first one was negative, and the second positive, I though that reusing the same negative word in a positive way would be ok... But I'll try to find something better.

p.s. It's interesting that you are writing poems in a language you aren't native to, I wish i could do that with Spanish!

French(Canadian) is my native language... But I found it was easier to actually write in English even thought I don't master it.

Thanks again !