Just another !

[Moc]

Hi Moc
After reading this a few times I started to correct some English and fill in some words that in my opinion might be there if English was your first language. The More times I read it the more I liked it, however, the "just another" didn't work for me. I was waiting for "just another wife".

Thanks a lot ! I'm wasn't sure about the just another neither, since it not fully positive, but I felt that it kind of set the tone, that we have lot of the same experience, but everytime we experience them, there something special that can come from it. So I decided to stick to it

As for the just another wife, I didn't want to make as I feel that it one of the thing that should be unique(I'm trying to think more positive ... But I kinda implied the wife and getting married in the last line.

One of the thing I wrote 'With this wife of mine' I'm not sure I like how it sound, but I feel it maybe posessive and detached at the same time, not sure if it appropriate...

But I think your right on the fact that maybe I should develop on this... But in true, this is more of something I'm inspiring too, than something I experienced... So harder to imagine a life long compagnion... And writing this last sentense, I guess this is what I should add at the end, Maybe "Just another end".

I'll probably rewrite the 'Just another place'. I feel like I went too fast and didn't polish it enough.