Just another !
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Hi Moc
After reading this a few times I started to correct some English and fill in some words that in my opinion might be there if English was your first language. The More times I read it the more I liked it, however, the "just another" didn't work for me. I was waiting for "just another wife".
Take my comments with a pinch of salt
I have no knowledge about a lot.
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Just another ! - by Moc - 03-08-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Just another ! - by Jamie - 03-08-2013, 06:45 PM
RE: Just another ! - by Moc - 03-08-2013, 11:59 PM
RE: Just another ! - by Claire - 03-11-2013, 05:36 AM
RE: Just another ! - by Moc - 03-11-2013, 07:15 AM



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