03-03-2013, 11:42 PM
(03-01-2013, 07:01 PM)escorial Wrote: rich mans shoe's
Only one pair made
middle class shoe's
shinney and new
working class shoe's
worn for all occasions
dead people shoe's
waiting in a charity shop.
I really like this poem. The concept is good, and I'm wondering if it could be built upon a little more. As it stands, it's an enjoyable and quick read, but it doesn't really leave much impact. It may be me selfishly asking for too much, but I just really dig the concept. Thanks for the read! =)
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